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Friday, December 30, 2011

Ex. 103: The Day After

This is an exercise from The 3 AM Epiphany that I found very interesting - basically the assignment was the following:

Imagine a moment just after some major historical event. Use ordinary people, not the Napoleons or Nancy Reagans. This will demand some research. Don't be afraid. It may be that these people have no idea what has just happened. 800 words

Clearly this is an interesting prompt for history nerds, and I'll probably use it again sometime to tackle a more contemporary topic. For now, I chose to write about the day after the death of Christ, because, though I don't particularly consider myself a Christian, it's undeniable that that day in history set a movement into motion that has changed the world several days over. At the same time though, I suspect most people at the time literally could not care less that yet another random dude with wild ideas had been executed by the Romans.

Please note that the exact date mentioned here is just a random suggested date I found on Wikipedia or something - I know that obviously the Roman (or Jewish) calendar would not have looked like this at the time, and I know that Christ may not even have died in 33 AD.

Saturday, April 4th, 33 AD

“A drink of wine, centurion?”

Devorah smiled broadly as the soldier in full Roman uniform entered the tavern, even if she was well aware he was no centurion. Having grown up under Roman occupation, she was better acquainted with the different insignia and their significance than most of the raw recruits who drank the cheapest brew she served.

This one was, she guessed, in his early twenties – old enough to have seen a little combat, perhaps, but young enough to have enjoyed it. A Marcus, she thought. They were all called Marcus or Lucius, these foreigners. It made things easy.

Marcus looked at her a little surprised, then grinned.

“Sure, sweetheart. Fill my cup to the top.”

He was sweaty and red in the face – without the tanned, leathery skin some of them developed after a long stay. Fresh off the boat, probably.

Devorah smiled again. New Romans, lonely for familiar food, familiar faces and a familiar girl in their beds, were good custom.

The soldier hoisted himself onto a high stool and looked her up and down as she handed him a cup of watery, cheap wine.

“You’re the first Jewess in this whole damn place who’s been friendly to me. What’s wrong with you girls?”

As she gently pushed a small plate of salty olives – complimentary, and very much included in the bill – his way, Devorah leaned her crossed arms on the bar.

“Well, centurion, today’s Shabbat, so you won’t be seeing many girls out anyway. It’s forbidden for Jews to work on the seventh day. As for any other time, I couldn’t tell you, but some find the uniform off-putting…”

She grinned, popping an olive into her own mouth and enjoying its greasy taste on her tongue.

“Then what sorta Jewess are you?”

It was not a bad question at that, Devorah thought to herself. She shrugged.

“Not the only one of my kind.”

He looked to the side, as though verifying her answer, and Devorah began to wonder if he was drunk already. The wine, though diluted considerably, could affect one already touched by heat heavily, she knew.

His eyes, curiously light, rested briefly on Miriam, sitting in the corner with two old regulars.

“I guess you’re not.”

Devorah nodded. She knew, of course, what the Sanhedrin – what most of her compatriots – thought of girls like them, but she was nonetheless at heart a pragmatist.

When Victoriana had offered her a job, she had been grateful. Though the tavern keeper herself was Roman – the runaway daughter of a senator or the illicit offspring of a Transtiberina whore, depending on the time of day – she believed that the soldiers enjoyed a glimpse of the exotic on their days off, and Devorah was inclined to believe she was right.

She smiled and wound a hennaed curl around her index finger as she filled the soldier’s cup again. She’d pegged him as the talkative type as he’d walked in and was about to revise that judgment when suddenly, he burped, looking downcast.

“Crucified a couple guys yesterday. Depressing business.”

She made a sympathetic noise, chewing an olive.

“Awful death, sweetheart.”

Devorah was not squeamish – you couldn’t when working in a place like this – but she hadn’t ever gone to watch an execution. She was sure, as all barmaids were, that a couple of her customers had ended up nailed to the wood at some time or another, but corpses smelled, and Golgotha was a depressing place.

“My, I bet, centurion. Messy.”

That made him laugh – a loud, boisterous guffaw.

“Yeah. Messy.”

He took a deep, long swig of wine, his eyes dark.

“Three guys. Two Jews, one Ethiopian. One of ‘em was that nutter – Lucius told me he’d pissed off locals for years. What’s his name again? Boy from up North. Delusions of grandeur.”

Devorah chewed another olive and spat out the pit.

“Oh, that guy. Stole a good customer off me once - he went pious on me. Well…”

“The others were more interesting. Held out longer, too. One was a thug who robbed a couple brothels near the harbor. They were gonna stone this whore who was his accomplice, but she paid off her debt in other ways, I hear. Our centurion’s been whistling all day.”

The girl giggled and swatted his arm.

“Hush. I know the one you mean – she’s a talent!”

The man grinned, a dirty joke in his eyes.

“The other was an Ethopian, a gang leader. Big guy, black as the night – plundered a couple warehouses and also a merchant’s wife. Though I’ve heard it said she wasn’t unwilling!”

Devorah nodded.

“We’ll all know what happened when Boeotius’ wife pops out a yellow baby, I’m guessing. Can’t really blame her. If I was married to a guy without teeth and for all we know without balls, I’d know what I’d do!”

“Oh yeah?” asked the unnamed soldier who may have been called Marcus,

“What would you do, huh?”

She threw her hair back and laughed, then gestured with a snap of her head.

“Come out back, honey, and I’ll show you.”

He followed.

Thursday, December 29, 2011

Epiphany



















This is the book I bought using my gift card. It's called The 3 AM Epiphany, by Brian Kiteley, and it lists a total of 201 exercises for aspiring writers. I like it because the prompts are not of the 'write about a childhood memory' variety - most of them are much more detailed and much more interesting. Some are technical (dealing with different voices and points of view, or how to construct a paragraph), others are topical (such as the sections on biography/autobiography, or on history) but none of them are particularly easy. It's a good book that I think will help me a lot. I'm currently editing the first response I wrote.

Writing

I've been writing fiction for most of my life, really. I wrote fan fiction before I even knew what it was, since as a child, before I fell asleep, I used to tell myself stories using the characters from my favorite books. I only found out that it was a real thing that other people did too when I stumbled across the Draco Dormiens trilogy (Harry Potter fanfiction) when I was thirteen or so. It's been a slippery slope from there.

I evolved later to writing mostly original fiction, though even now, I occasionally write a one-shot to some book or tv series I enjoy. It's fun, particularly if one is the type of person who gets inordinately attached to fictional characters. I miss them when the book, the series, the movie is over, and so I enjoy keeping them alive in that way.

I did NaNoWriMo three times in high school. My first novel was a fantasy story about the sunken island of Atlantis, and though it was not the best thing since chocolate, it had certain elements that I still find interesting, such as the question whether gods and goddesses die when nobody is left to worship them. A friend of mine reminded me of that question yesterday, since it's being explored in a book series he is reading, and it made me think of my story. Which had, of course, a tragic ending.

I don't recall what order I wrote my other two NaNo novels in, but one was a historical novel set in 1960s England, starring two characters who had switched identities as teenage girls during the War. They were both French, and one was Jewish and fleeing to Canada (or someplace? I don't even recall) whereas the other was simply being evacuated to England, and they switched identities at a train station. I feel like this was based vaguely on a children's book I once read, but it also featured a murder and a bunch of really messed up secondary characters. I never finished that story, because I fear it was pretty juvenile and uninformed. My intentions were good, but I should have done more historical research. I'm still, however, fond of Sarah Schopenauer, and maybe one day I'll tell her story in another way.

The other book was actually pretty interesting. It mixed three story lines, one set in the 1500s, one set in the 1880s and one set in the 1920s, all three in England. The 16th century narrative dealt with the mysterious death of Lady Amy Dudley, who was the wife of the Earl of Leicester who may or may not have been the lover of Elizabeth I (and, at least at one time, probably was). The other narratives deal with the descendants of a distant relative who came to live with her during her final years. This story really had some potential and I had a good time writing it - it came pretty close to being finished, and I may pick it up again.

I haven't written an original story in a while, but one of my Christmas presents (once again using the Amazon gift card my friend gave me) was a book of fiction writing exercises. I hope to post some of the results on here, if I deem them un-bad enough.

Tuesday, December 27, 2011

My first thousand words?

I am mentally ten years old, and apparently prefer learning through children's books. A friend of mine was kind enough to give me an Amazon gift card for Christmas, and this was one of the four books I purchased:





































It's really quite cool. I have a shaky history with vocabulary-list-style books (read: I buy them and then do nothing with them) but I'm hoping to get at least something out of this one. Even apart from my interest in Judaism, I really like Hebrew as a language and I would love to be fluent some day. It'd probably be good to learn words that are not 'mi chamocha ba'eilim, adonai' or 'eshet chayil' (though I found an Eshet Chayil song on Spotify that's awesome, but I don't think I am very much of an eshet chayil, so there you go).

We will see how it goes.